The idea was there...
...but the execution was flawed. First of all, if you're going to blatently copy the original Flash objects, do it right. Strong Bad's head didn't look right. (Let's not get into the fact that you probably didn't get permission to use the objects that the Chaps brothers use, or else you probably would have noted that in the credits somewhere.)
The background noise should have been quieter and the foreground noise should have been louder. And of course it didn't even sound like Strong Bad. There's not even that "gargly" or "gritty" quality to it.