Uh....
Well, uh, interesting...kinda.
David, man, this was not a good movie. I'm not gonna lie. First off, I actually thought that this was going to go somewhere, but instead, all it was was a dude that walked down a hallway, up some stairs, and some crane thingies rose. That was it. No plot, no action, no interest. Nothing.
Second, if you were going to make a plotless movie and put music to it, why SOAD? I mean, when the song broke into the heavier stuff, it made me think that something was going to happen, but nope. It really fucked up what little you had going for you in the first place. You should pick something that matches the tone of the movie. You didn't.
Also, the song is about 3:30 minutes long. How many scenes did you have? Four? Five? In any case, they were excrutiatingly long. In the first scene, I minimized the movie, went and checked my e-mail, and came back, and was STILL IN THE FIRST SCENE. Which just happened to be a guy walking down a hall, so I don't feel that I missed much.
You might want to try coming up with a plot before you make the movie you're talking about in your notes. I mean, come on. You've made two other movies. I think you can step it up just a little.