Reviews for Sonic New Adventure Part1

[TBO]

I didn't really get it... but good work, I guess!

The thing with this Flash was that it didn't really seem to serve any distinct purpose. It's story was short, it's humor was lacking in some departments, and the overall presentation was below average.

Also, I didn't quite understand why Mario and Sonic weren't mortal enemies.

But the Mario Music alone makes it worthwhile watching in my books. A few pieces of advice for a sequel:

1. Have the text appearing in a black box beneath the Flash. It makes it easier to read.
2. Make it longer, include more random games references etc.
3. Try to develop the story further.

Overall though, good effort, good achievement.

TBO

[Rested]

ooookay

wow i hope you make something better than this....did sonic get into like a weird time loop or something because it feels like he got stuck and than another sonic came in and he went the other direction and seem to have gotten stuck in time again....i dont know where you going with this whole science fiction thing...but now im stuck to it...i wanna know what happened to that first sonic!..wow!

[redguy]

??????

everything was going really fast.and the story line is a little to easy.and i saw the hole time things on the left.
lot of bad things.when are they gotta fight?soorry that i reviewt this so bad.it just wasn't so good.
but still: Good job!

Ancientpredator responds:

hello, i've fixed some bugs. i think it's a bit better now

[wDx-Bloodhound]

I can see effort

I can see that you tried but with the sprites mixed it seems confusing...ahwell atleast you tried

[KatoAllah]

Uhh...

Honestly, that was a very bad movie, and I'm not the type to be so hyper-critical. For one, if you're going to do a sprite movie, then you should really come with something great, since so many have already been done, and some have been really excellent. Also, did you intend for the viewer to be able to see off of the stage, because you can see Sonic in his spinning form just hanging out at the left side of the screen after he jumps back to try to save Mario. And you need to compress that music. No way in hell should that movie have been nearly 2 MB. But anyways, I really have nothing positive to say about this movie. I just hope that you did it quickly, cause I would feel bad had you spent weeks crafting this thing.