lol suck less?
lemme see if i got your format correct, bass strings and cellos on same, snare everyonce in awhile with cymbal, second violins doing arpeggios, violas same as cellos, and a solo violin, and did i hear a siren? its good. my recommendation would be to not make it a solo, maybe only a solo in the beginning cause the melody i think repeats itself. make it a duet the second time, third time duet with harmony (while the arpeggios continue have the duet violin countermelody using counterpoint) accent more with cellos, they are beautiful instruments. then again these are just my opinions :) you have a great concept. if it was more developed it could be a spectazcular performance. 4/5 8/10 (i wont vote cause that'll decrease your score)