Long time not talk, lol
Your getting better man. Your delivery like Lipz said, could of been a bit better and sometimes it sounds like you get confused when your rapping and mix up words making it hard to understand you. In other words you need to work on your pronunciation. J-Kellz killed it. But you still did pretty damn good and your getting better.
5/5 - 4.17 / 5.00 (+ 0.065)
haha sometimes i do get confused, i need to start memorizing more, that would prolly help. kellz did kill it. good lookin out!
Dayum
This is a pretty damn dope track. I really love that beat, would be sweet to freestyle to. Sweet flows, too. Keep collabin, boys.
Always a pleasure to hear good reviews from you. Hit me up anytime for a collab
no billy, ur wrong! lol
u jus need to have the autotune set to the key of the beat. but true, holding a note can sound cool. and it also helps if u be a lil melodical on the autotune.
sick song my dudes!~
-Pop Rock of DDE
haha okay ill keep that in mind to. thanks for the look out! when we gonna collab?
Hmmm.
Not bad at all. Lyric content is not exactly Immortal Technique material, the message is really weak. Too focused with the bullshit 'thug' image that most rap nowadays tries to push off. Delivery indeed was a wee awkward in some spots.
Otherwise the beat and flow is excellent, really good job on the ambience in the track.
-CO
there was no bullshit 'thug' image. its straight gutta rap. you cant always rap about changing the world.
good
i usually keep it to myself but im really unimpressed by the rappers on this site
but i have to say that lyrically, u really are skilled
id say the best on the site in that area
like a few other people said ur delivery is a little akward
u mumble a little too much etc. but the dubbing does help to some degree
ok flow from kellz, his cool voice helps a lot
i think if u work on ur delivery problem, and add that to ur great lyricism and good flow, ud be hot man
nice track
as always 2shek, much appreciated