Good Remix - Almost there.
I really like the remake you made of the song....but it definitely needs much more orchestral elements to it. (things like violins, piano, or acoustic guitar). And if it helps...I mean like adding multiple strings of those instruments, not just one by itself, because that makes it sound too easy or half-done. And like the other users, I thought that loud rattling sounded too wierd.
I do agree that your remake is seemingly different from the original, and that is why it does get a nicer score. Keep working on it! :)