Fine, I'll be original
lets see what I can pick on besides spelling. Well, no sound or music of any kind. Not a praticularily bad thing for a game but doesn't do much justice for a movie.
Then I suppose there's the automatic dialogue boxes... it's better to make buttons to let the user manually move from scene to scene when there's no audio... it's not hard to do... I forget what it is but you basically make a button and then put something like Next.scene in its actionscript or something.
Also, add a plot, or a storyline, or a joke, or anything that will make this flash, interesting/funny/worth the energy it takes to click on "Play this Movie". If you're not the type of person who's good at that but still want to make flashes, you can look for some rant or story on the internet and make a flash of that as a tribute (don't forget to mention the author).
Sorry this review is so long. BTW, the animation was all right.