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Some things could have been better but what is really suprizing is that you waited till you had a decent entry before submitting it to the portal! Bravo! You have really shown up a lot of the other beginning flash artists. Keep working on your graphics. I liked the style of the silhouettes and the rain, for that you get an 8 on style.
Oh, and I was a little confused at first because your katakana "shi" looked like a "tsu" but then again, so do mine.