Not too shabby
I love the demo, it's fun but a little flat, try to add a little more music in the background and make the need to reload sound a little louder (however you did get the perfect sound for it) try to add a little or than just shoot to kill, maybe add a few elements from the meatl of Honor series like ducking, more weapons, and maybe even a vehicle mission. All in all this is a good piece of work. Go to it, blam the last mo-ron to review and good luck on the next one!