Suggestions: an End perhaps?
. . . you know a point of termination after your film instead of an endless loop. Also substance in the film. But keep trying, there's hope for you yet. Oh and lots of clicky arrows dosen't help it much.
Reviews for "Randomness With FF1"
1 Word Sound.
This looked intresting at first but then i realized it didnt have any sound when i though i had mute on but if a flash dosent have sound then the movie loses its impact on its veiwers. Add sound and then resumit.
:) < shall I reply to your comment? Yes.
:) < (I'm trying my best not to get on anyone's bad side recently, so if you take this seriously, then I might never write reviews for a long time.)
#1 Does your Flash program take sound? I think it would help with some music, or voices, or even explosion noises; that may make it sound more realistic.
#2 I enjoy your graphic style. Unlike my visions of what this movie may be like when I clicked here, I didn't expect the film to be drawn.
#3 Did you take an idea from 8-bit Theater (the comic or the 3-part flash film i saw)? 'cause it felt like one.
:D < anyways, I hope this did not offend you. (fingers crossed) Good luck in the future.
good job
the animation was smooth and very well done (with the exception of the mushroom cloud- needs to be bigger and more colorful). If you add some background music and some sound effects your score would probably double. keep at it.
Funny
add sound, and try to draw a bit better, and make it longer