O.k., but a couple of thingys....
Well....Like the person before said, the music choice was bad, although I like the song. It just didnt mix. But you have good skills as a flash artist, and I think you should put them to better use, not to a series about children mauling each other and dying. Maybe if you did something different, not like madness though, there are so many people who rip krinkles. Well man, I think you should take some time to think of a new series. I do applaude you, but it just doesn't seem to fit right..for some reason....