could be better
It needs more speed, and like the rest said, more pizzaz.
could be better
It needs more speed, and like the rest said, more pizzaz.
Sounds okay, but...
Sounds alright, except the key is way off. I'd work on it a bit more. The instruments sound nice, though.
...Exactly what did you mean by "the key is way off?" The chords are correct (CM, Fm, CM, Fm, Cm7, Gm, CM, CM, Fm, CM, Fm, Cm, Cm7, GM, Cm7, GM, G7, Cm, Gm C; and then it repeats). The root key is correct, being Cm. What would you have liked me to work on?
You see, people, if you don't give me the details on what to do, I WON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO!!