Uuh.......................huh
Well, It's good for a first attempt. I do say though, you might want to work on your humor a bit. The thing that makes a good funny flash is the delivery. You did an okay job of it, But you just need to find a better way to deliver the punchline of the joke. Well, hope this one stays.
-GuNcaNDy
Not quite a cut above
It's a decent first attempt at flash. Nothing overly impressive but hell it worked, so you're on the right track.
for a first attempt that was great.
as a piece of flash on the whole it was ok.
i didn't really get it, but i laughed my ass off when he had the cat on his head.
well done.
make more but longer and with a better ending.
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well two words wil explain how i feel about it. can you guess them??
bet you can!!
YOU SUK
nice constructive critisism there. Really worth your time leaving that review eh?
it was good
i liked it, it didnt really match the title though, u should make something scary come out of the box.