Well ..
This was pretty good !
Nice fadein and fadeout of the sprites.
Music should NOT just cut-off like that after playing for 3 seconds. Use a FLASHKIT Mp3 loop or something.
Nice job on text bubbles.
Odd that the player's portrait appeared in one bubble-frame and no-where else.
Not much of a story, baddie against another baddie ..
It's a start. :)
David