Eh... not the best
This wasn't the best flash I've seen, but far from the worst. I enjoyed the book, and this is a welcome rendition, though I, as usual would have changed some things. But that's just me.
However, next time, the dialogue should be more... organic. It sounded like they were typing what they would say into computer programs, both because of the bad voice acting (though not your fault) and the long pauses.
PS, it's Zaroff, not Zoroff.