Not really interesting.
Whoopie. I read that book, and all that you changed is that the other guy dies. woohoo. yippie. You are not very original. I think you should have had them both die.
Not really interesting.
Whoopie. I read that book, and all that you changed is that the other guy dies. woohoo. yippie. You are not very original. I think you should have had them both die.
lets see u animate something of equal size in 8 hours or less. and having both of them die isnt Original... its just your opinion of what should have happened.
Eh... not the best
This wasn't the best flash I've seen, but far from the worst. I enjoyed the book, and this is a welcome rendition, though I, as usual would have changed some things. But that's just me.
However, next time, the dialogue should be more... organic. It sounded like they were typing what they would say into computer programs, both because of the bad voice acting (though not your fault) and the long pauses.
PS, it's Zaroff, not Zoroff.
Yes! If only people would read the commontary before the reveiw the movie! It was not my fault, i did multiple recordings with each person, but a AzN and a Mexican cant speak the best English. And they were my partners, nothing i could have done about it, they needed to do SOMETHING related with the project.
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Lets see....
Graphics:The characters looked funny,try adding more animation next time
Sound:The voices were very well done,although they sounded a bit funny
read the short story; helluva alot better than thi
It was ok. Why the hell do people keep using flash to create homwork assignments. How do you present them anyways?
And the guys who did the voices seemed like they had something stuck up their asses seeing how boring you guys sounded. The syncing blew too.
since i already explained the voice acting and voice synch, im going to explain using flash for homework assignments.
1. It makes people go oohh and aaahh.
2. the teacher is to busy watching it, you can hit on the hot chick next to you.
3. You dont have to stand up in front of a class and present blah blah! You let a little projecter do all the work for you.
4. I wanted to.
well...
Funny I didn't think the movie was that bad, but when you break it down into those catagories i realized they all sucked. I really like that short story, but the animation was just dumb. Can't you think of a better alternate ending than that he was shot? Also, they just sat there and talked to eachotther. No one moved.
when youve been slacking off and trying to bust out a decent flash a.s.a.p., u tend to cut back on alot of areas. By the way, I have only been using flash for about 3 months now.