it's pretty good
it's alright but showing the same thing over and over again is lame but on some of them you added some other words but its all good i like enough to give it a good vote
Reviews for "Mountain of Venus"
Great start...
Yeah it is indeed a great start. Graphics, style and music is great, and wonderful how you set the mood. I did acctaully miss some shadings in your pictures though.
It's defintly a good preview, but I'm not a big fan of pointless preludes and the "one man..."- thing is overused too.
Not Bad
If you do finish this movie, PLEASE CHANGE YOUR THEE's TO THE's. THEY MAKE NO SENSE THE WAY YOU HAVE THEM. YOU CAN'T CHANGE A DETERMINANT INTO AN OBJECTIVE CASE PRONOUN. That's my two cents. Grammar/spelling errors drive me nuts when the submitted piece has less than twenty words total and no complex sentences. How hard can it be when the rest of the animation took hours to complete, to actually go back and proofread what you wrote? Simple simple. Thee=you (basically). You want to replace each THEE you wrote with THE. The reader has to make those stress and inflection decisions on their own.
yeah...
no doubt you should have finished it, yet I still really like it...the style, the drawings, the atmosphere, finish it and I'll give ya a really big score