too fast
You need to give more time to read the text and this could go far.
Reviews for "Zero Presaga"
D-Spec responds:
Sp-anks!
It has potential...
It seems like a nice premise, but the subtitles go by too fast to take it all in. The fight animations look good, but it's too small. Try making a larger version next time.
D-Spec responds:
Larger version, hmmmmm... I might try that. Later though, not now. Not enough time trying to resize everything to fit in with everything else. Maybe you could do it for me? What about that zoom option? Can't you use that also? Just a thought. I'm very Sarcastic btw (^_~.)
Text could be bigger
If the text was larger it would be easier to read.
Why so small?
Your text moved too quick, I was barely able to catch everything. Also, your story had no setup... even some text in the preloader would have been helpful. Without better staying power for this series... I'm worried this submission won't stand up to the other MM flash tributes...
D-Spec responds:
Well seeing as how you have the reading skill of a 3 year old, it understandable. I'll tell you what, you make a animation. Then come back to me and be a critic. Most of the people who write reviews, have actually done an animation or two.
Btw, it's not a MM flash tribute. It's a Zero flash tribute, hence the name "Zero Presaga." You need to learn how to read. Ohyeah, and if this is too much for your little brain to comprehend, then you can write another lame review telling me so. Have a nice day.
Sprite Movies
Are overused
D-Spec responds:
Then stop watching them, then maybe you wouldn't see them as much. Then when you start watching them again, you'll say "Wow, i havn't watched a sprite movie in a very long time" So that way you can't complain about "Sprite Movies" being overused.