Yikes!!
Well if it isn't GolemCC himself. What's up my main, man. My dawg. My ace-in-the-hole. Second place. ;)
This is.. great. As usually your style of drawing is amazing. I can't even begin to describe how great the plot was. The dialog, the characters and the choice of music is, as in all of your work, including comics and animations, state-of-the-art. Really the only thing I can say was less good was the animation in some places. It runs very smoothly in some places, while in the intro it's not that perfect. I'm not saying it's bad, I'm just saying compared to the perfect smooth animation in the rest of the flash, it's not as good.
Overall, the best flash animation you've done this far, without question. I love your work, continue it, or die a slow horrible death!
All my fivsorz are belongs to this!