Not half bad..
..but not half good either. Being a hardcore fan of Final Fantasy VI I can't help but point out a couple of flaws.
1. My biggest problem is that you left out out everyone's favorite 16-bit laugh. Kefka's laugh should never be replaced with anything else.
2. "Fiends are attacking Narshe". WTF? o_O Fiends don't exist until FFX, dude. Up until that time they're simply monsters.
3. Did Locke really have to tell Terra to stay put? I mean.. she could hold her own in the game. Once again: WTF?
4. "Where's Locke now?" "At the castle gate!" "Have him meet me at the Jidoor Inn." Super WTF here. He's outside the freaking gate, Narshe is under attack, Terra's missing, and Edgar's gonna make Locke run ALL the freaking way to Jidoor to talk to him? And since when does Edgar have a buggy?
Other than that.. it's an okay flash.