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Reviews for "tellos(early version)"

well anyway...

if you do a good job, i'll give you a cookie!
but it looks like the story line is gonna be cheesy and boring. i mean c,mon. "in a world where fantasy is reality.." doesnt sound that exciting to me. art is good though. it looks like you tried mixing a few FF characters together. BUrrPp

JarodMx responds:

well the characters arent mine. this is based on a comic. its not gonna be cheesy i assure you. as for "In a world where fantasy is reality" i couldnt think of anything good to write so i wrote that. if i think of anything better i'l be sure to change it. also this was supposed to be blammed but it wasnt, so i thank you for lowering the score (seriously)

2 seconds??

I can see the talent, but this was just a waste of my time. Too short to give it _any_ kind of impression.

JarodMx responds:

i agreee

man thoughs graphic kick ass

dude make a longer one and youve got your self a kic ass movie

Finish it...

...because what very little you posted looks good.

JarodMx responds:

thanks

finish!

adding a pre-loader would be a good idea next time.. :-) if a lot of people reviewed 'nothing really here except graphics, no sound, plot or animation really' would it be enough motivation for you ? caus' thats the probable feedback you will get.. but the text that followed the short featured presentation of 'a world where reality is fantasy' is quite a teaser, very appealing... i look forward to the storyline... graphics are good, your animation is a bit jerky, more motion tweening required - but it's a good start... and obviously sound too, it wouldn't hurt.. good wor, finish it