I give you credit for...
...making GIR in a flash movie. I loved Zim, but your movie didn't make a lot of sense. The lag issue was there, and you know that. Fix that and it could become a great short with some minor tweaking.
Reviews for "Happy Holidays with GIR"
Sir-Eatsalot responds:
If you looked at my other movies, none of them make any sense... Why is this? I don't story board. I sit down drink a few cokes and draw random crap through it together and try to make an animation out of it.
Not bad
5 Frames per second never looked so good.
Sir-Eatsalot responds:
actually its 30 frames per second, and its the snow and fog that made it run slow on your computer. I could've of made it better but I didn't, cuz I'm lazy, ohwell.
good
but the snow looked like bugs
Was that Snow?
Looked more like ashes raining down from the hevens nukeular winter style.
Sir-Eatsalot responds:
YAY! NUCLEAR WINTER!!! Now we need to shoot lots of pollution into the air to create a green house effect to cancel out the nuclear winter.
Well....
Um...it was random. I'm usually all for the randomness, but this was random in a slightly lame way. The animation was mediocre, the music...it fit, but it was annoying, and overall it was just kinda lame. My advice, sit down, look over your stuff before you submit it. Ask yourself, How many times has this been done before, Does it offer any new elements, Does it contain a joke many will get or only a few, does it have a plot or is it just random, if it's random is it random in a 'wow that was Jhonen V. randomness' or will is it 'wow, I saw a 5 year old do that yesterday'. You have potential with the animation and style, but work on entertainment value.
Sir-Eatsalot responds:
I don't watch newgrounds shows anymore, and I made this last year, and I wasn't trying to get a great score, just wanted people to see it.