Reviews for Rig - I don't know what to do

[alias-hack]

IMHO, LOL ACRONYMS

Great song, reminds me of those crazy sephora songs like "Living Hell" on the subject of ideas. I think you should end it with that big scream at the beginning, but only the scream, very minamalist, maybe only a few things, but the scream is the most prominent part. I think that would put a strong contrast between the rest of the song which is all crazy and loud and full of noise and the end which is the opposite. I'm not a music making guy though so I wouldn't really know, whatever you do is golden anyways so it doens't really matter.

On second thought, just cum onto the mic at the end, becuase when I finish listening to this song I'm spent LMAO LOL ACRONYMS.

[Sundersoft]

Holy shit..

It's awesome. You should definately make it into a full song, but it's also good the way it is now.

Suggestions(not that I have any experience making music):
-Leave the first 48 seconds alone/make minimal changes.
-I don't think it really needs an intro, but it wouldn't be any worse...
-The song sort of drags on past 0:48 so maybe improve everything after that, but make it less intense than the beginning.
-After 1:30 you could go back to the starting part of the song and then gradually make it less intense until the end of the song(maybe 3-4 minutes long).
-I think the vocals end in the middle of the song(hard to tell). You could play them towards the end of the 3-4 minutes with some buildup so that they're the only thing playing along with a few instruments. (which would be 3 distinct times total for the vocals)
-I agree that ending it with a scream would be nice.

[Mr-green-apple]

screaming vocals

hahaha ive always wondered what would happen if DnB went hardcore with chopped screaming........ I DONT KNOW WHAT THE FUCK TO DO DODODODOD awwwwwwwwwww SO ILL JUST SIT RIGHT HERE AND SPINNNINININININININN

[Spikrodd]

lolol

diz iz g00d n stuf lol bt i lke paragon mre. mybe u shld be mre liek him lol

Rig responds:

l0l00ll0l0ll0l00l yah i no

[XDragonslayerX]

The fool below me is wrong.

This is a great song, just the way it is. Paragon is a totally different person with a diferent style..and as I said in the rest of your songs................................
...............................YEEEEE EEAH GET IT OOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!

Rig responds:

mabe i shud b mor liek px9 lululol