Reviews for 16Bit Star Wars

[Chickenman590]

Not Bad

Excellent job on this movie! But I must say, because you ripped the sprites from the SNES systems, which are 32 bit systems, shouldn't it be called 32 bit Star Wars?

No matter.

I LOVED the fighting sequences! They were very smooth and unflawed, but I must point out, when the lightsaber cuts through human flesh, it singes the veins etc. closed, so there is no blood! (Excluding the Aqualish race.) But still, I enjoyed the force sounds from Jedi Knight Dark Forces 2, and Luke really beat up those baddys. I enjoyed the storyline, a bit plain, but enjoyable none-the-less. The path choice is why I gave interactivity a 5, it was the only thing, but I enjoyed controlling the outcome.

Now for a few minor point outs:

-When the Galactic Empire was defeated, the Rebel Alliance made it the 'New Republic' it was no longer a Galactic Senate.

-Luke claims that he could not handle the entire Imperial taskforce on his own when he called for Han, but Han ended up staying in space, and at the end Luke slaughtered the task force single handidly.

-'Imperial' is not spelled 'Emperial.'

-A 'W' is lowercased when it should be upercassed in the credits.

-If you plan on using a soundtrack that revolves around the original trilogy, please use the original trilogy soundtracks. (good job on the Imperial March, though)

Overall that is about it. Great job!

9/10

DeadByDawn responds:

Hello and thank you for pointing out my mistakes. There were a few more actually then what you pointed out but all in all it was a good animation for my fourth attempt. I do have something to point out however. The Galactic senate was reinstated after the demise of the Dark Lord. The Senate is actually just a form of government used by Lucus to point out both the good and the bad points with democracy in the real world. Luke was able to destroy the entire fleet and army because of the fact that the power of the Dark Lord was creating an illusion of so many forces. This is the reason that the remainder of the remnant "turned tail and ran." I however reallized that this was not pointed out well enough in the story. Also I chose to use the John Williams overtures because I felt it was a more powerfull piece than just using the Darth Vader theme or the Imperial <=== spelled right, march. I also chose across the stars as the ending piece because it was more suited then just using the traditional star wars ending. I also wanted to point out that I am not George Lucas and am in no way affiliated with him or his subsidieres. This was the reason for the change. Also the use of blood in the fight sequences was more for the Newgrounds community. I felt at the time that carterizing the enemies wounds would take away from the action that a lot of people here thought the animation lacked. However all in all this animation was for the hardcore Star Wars fans like yourself who can point out errors like the ones you pointed out. I very much thank you for your review. It takes time to type what you did and I thank you. Oh and the name 16 bit star wars is correct. Super Nintendo used a variety of bit rates in their games. Such as, bubble bobble used 8 bits, while Super Star Wars used 16, while Contra used 32 bits. This can be checked at Cherryroms.com if you doubt me. Thanks again. DeadByDawn

[Cactusjuice]

Great!

Great storyline,good battle sceens,an overall great movie,suggestions:
when the heavy trooper was walking i noticed a black dot appear every so often,that can be easily solved thouh,the graphics were pretty good but some pictures were abit fuzzy,not that big a deal though,keep it up!

[Havok44]

This is a good for a Star wars parody

But i thought in this movie would adventure Mario and others.Well this movie shows that you are a big Star wars fan.

[Admiral8Q]

Ok...

I'd have to say, great idea, but the story line moved along too slow. For text, it you could have the option to click when done reading, that could speed it up for fast readers like me (and I suppose be helpful to slow readers too)

You complain about the NG file size restriction? Instead of degrading and leaving stuff out of your movie, have several "to be continued..." episodes.

I gave you a high rating for style because it was something original, and not a comedy.

I will watch for your next episode (if you plan on making one) This is a great start!

[Darklilangel23]

that was great

that could almost be a new movie

that was great good s/f sound omg the music was perfect love the sound track

you did a good job with the story

over all its a great job
only lil mistakes like spelling errors and lil choppy i took points off for

but other than that keep up the great work