Holy...
How can you spit out flashes of this quality EVERY DAY?!? I'ver been working on my flash for like 3 weeks and it probably won't do as well as this one is. (good job)
Reviews for "( Intruder Alert )"
Livecorpse responds:
its an unhealthy obsession, my man.
glad ya liked it, good luck on ur project
nice
I liked it.. but myabe if u put more work into it I give it a higher rating(by more into it I mean maybe a longer clip)
Livecorpse responds:
k
kinda dull
Why do you even try for a semblance of a story when [the story] is going to be that bad? Why not call your show 'Intruder beat down' and just start with the fight scene. Either make a story that is DECENT or toss it and only show the visuals. I was going to say something about insulting intelligence but this is posted for a bunch of children to see.
Livecorpse responds:
@_o;;
Graphic, and short but oh so good
First off I liked this, I havent seen any other work by you so this is my first experience with you, so far good job.
What I didn't like
It was short and a little story
Dont take that as bad there was a story but I would like to see more of a developing story or more of one what yu had was nice
Faces
I didnt like the faces of the guard / enforcer I didnt see a mask or it really wasnt visible to me
What I did like
Well of course the ending was great, the strugle and what I really liked was the physics I noticed with the blood, I dono that is just in my mind for some reason, I also like the voices. That is all I can think of that might be able to help yeah. Great job on this one
Livecorpse responds:
Thx man this review was helpful. special attention usually paid to the blood.
thats cool ya liked it
A step up
The most visually impressive I've seen your work, nice job.
Livecorpse responds:
thanks for the feedback. i think this style is fitting