Pretty decent work.
Pretty decent work.
Try searching for deeper themes
For your haikus.
Reviews for "Haikus"
Don't defend it twice.
World is only one syllable, see:
goatasaur responds:
You are correct, sir.
I wish to apologize.
I am only man.
Funny stuff
I give this a four.
It made me laugh real hard, man.
Beer sprays out my nose.
(But the last line in the Paris Hilton haiku was only four syllables. Otherwise I would have given it a 5).
goatasaur responds:
Let me count them out.
That way we can be certain.
"ar-ound-the-wor-ld"
Mediocre.
It was interesting, but there isn't really much to it. By the way, it isn't technically a haiku unless it's talking about nature, but perhaps that's just my nit-picky side speaking again.
goatasaur responds:
Traditionally,
you are correct. But think here:
Is Japanese too?
cheated
this did not work you
just cheated and returned where
you needed the sylabols to fit
(ya it didn't work out, so sue me)
goatasaur responds:
Three sentences does not
a haiku have to be, sir.
Just the syllables.