Can't wait....
Way cool....butt Billy was X1 right....and the other 1 with the blonde haires was X2 right? The previeuw sais that the blond guy is X1....:S But i can't wait
Reviews for "X4 Preview"
CheveLoco responds:
yeah a lil misunderstanding lol..sorry
Woah!!!, Cool!!!!!
Yuor flashes are getting better.
a series with potential
responding to Dranigus' eight advices that he gave you, i have to say i only agree with a few of them.
Responding to his "high intense violence" suggestion, personally i don't think it's really necessary. You don't really need blood and gore to make a movie cool, and I honestly think what you are doing now is fine.
As for his idea about tension, i may want to remind him that you have already three episodes of this series already, there would be no reason for you to start all over again. But, if you do wish to add more "tension" to it, you may have to increase the total number of episodes.
and his third idea... voices, i strongly agree with what he said. Maybe this is a little biased, but i personally think that movies with no voices are somewhat amateur. Like he said, I believe you should hook up with some artists that make movies with excellent sound quality and ask for help and pointers.
for plot and length... personally i don't think length and plot matters that much. Although it's true that your plot is somewhat predictable, and the length is a little short. But whoever said a classic story isn't good? And short movies aren't always bad. I think what you are doing now is fine.
as for his talk on comedy, i personally think that comedy is a great thing. All funny and cheerful and all that stuff. But it's hard to include comedy in a flash with a serious mood. Just same as you don't find much comedy in Resident Evil or Warcraft, and that's because they have a serious mood in their game.
Action... i'm tired now, what I honestly think what you are doing now is fine. Same thing as i said about violence. You're doing fine, just maybe don't try to include too much DBZ style... *ie eyes and mouths that shake lyk forever...* i took marks off style cuz of that.
Nudity... i don't really think so, you're trying to make a fighting movie thingy here, not necessarily a porno with a storyline. If you are maybe in the wrong movie. Honestly, i watch your flashes because I want to see action and how the plot develops, not necessarily to see some naked chick here jumping around juggling her boobs. But yeah, the lesbian scenes Dranigus suggested is just bizarre to me.
so yeah... thx if u actually read it lol
i took marks off becuase your graphics arent necessarily THE BEST.. so yeah
sounds becasue you have no voice, but i'm sure you're working on it.
marks off style because it looks ALOT lyk DBZ... in which i mentioned earlier.
Violence-wise, you're doing fine... just maybe not enough in THIS episode =) but keep it up
--Coolicy
Greetings Rigo
I am Dranigus, I have come to give you eight sightful hints in making a great anime.
First: High Intense Violence, if you have watched Resident Evil or Tekken you would know what I am talking about. X the anime film is better though upon grasping this subject.
Second: Tension, there needs to be a continuous conflict between the hero and the villian, of coarse this may change later. But the villian still remains as the key rival to the hero.
Third: Voices, you need not just any voices, you need the best acting voices that no money can offer. Unfortunate for you I do not have a microphone hooked up to my computer so you are going to have to ask Legendary Frog, Waterman, and other such people that are most likely will assist you for little or no fee. (Especially Legendary Frog, there is nothing he will not do to past the time and I mean nothing).
Four: Plot, you need a key ongoing plot, something like there being an android bent on destroying the world by obtaining some kind of power and the heroes are trying to prevent that from occuring.
Five: Length, you need each episoid to be 15 minutes or more and the series to be atleast three hours long. That is twelve episoids. I know its hard, but heck thats what you got to do, and being an animator isn't a picnic tell you me.
Six: Comedy, you need some comical aspects to lighten the mood ever so often, even I, a great fan of hardcore violence can get horrified by too much gorific graphics.
Seven: Action, you need key sequencing action, even better than Genryu's Blade. Sorry though but you could do better, since most of that action was how to say it, sketchy. Oh well. Anyways use as smooth as possible animation.
Eight: Hot chicks, you need nudity, hot fresh girls naked in your anime. Trust me, you'll enjoy your place as probably 1st for atleast aslong until your next masterpiece. I would suggest some lesbian scenes if you ever get crossed it.
not bad
for a preview it was good, now let's just see the full version and i'll be happy.