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Reviews for "HeavenhelI {Goth Rock}"

nice

its very good and has been put together well, it sounds like a birthday massacre song but with no singing. i think thats what its missing but overall its a good submission

Lorens4444 responds:

Thanks. I'll try to sing.

Cozy

It was quite cosy to listen to, and had a soothing touch, but i don't understand how you could possibly call this gothic rock?
Take a swing by youtube or myspace, search for bauhaus and listen to their first single "Bela lugosi's dead", there you got tru old school goth.

Pretty good

The guitar was probably the weakest part but overall it was pretty awesome.

Lorens4444 responds:

Please tell me in PM how to improve sound of guitar.

Err....

Are you sure thats you on guitar? Because it sounds A LOT like the guitar midi in FL Studio...
Other than that, i liked the composition, i would use different sounds though so that the melody would come out, and perhaps alternate instruments with respect to the melody.
The drums are ok, they do the job.
It does get a little repetitive which leads to some "boring" moments.

It has a lot of potential, so keep working on it.

~WOLF~

Lorens4444 responds:

One part is is guitar midi, but other part is me on guitar. :)
I know this sounds are not so different, but i hadn't sounds other then FL has. :)
Thanks for the review and advices. I'm realy glad you took your time and wrote it.

preaty good

I like it but, its missing something. I don't know what though? :)