not bad for a n00b
when you said it was your first flash it mislead me in to thinking it would suck, but it was actually better than i expected. good job.
Reviews for "Super Mario:Lost Battle"
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It was good until the McDonalds joke. After that is went downhill.
Um, what in all of gehena, WAS THAT!??!
I am so tired of seeing people use "nigga talk", in video game parodies, and to make peach seem like a whore, mario a pimp... I mean, get some originallity! People have already done that! And it was'nt even that funny! The end was also sick and pointless. I can see you were trying for some kind of humor. However, I cannot tell what it is.
The spritework was'nt bad, however I hope you do some better storyline in the future.
Good
It's really good for a noob like yourself there were a lot of good things about it except for the text cause u couldnt read what they were saying sometimes... it would pop up, then disapear but other then that nice job