It could be better...
IT looks like a promising series. You could put a little more effort into the art. And the sound cuts out at Chilly Willie's. But all in all, not too bad.
Reviews for "Roomies (preview)"
thepromaster responds:
Thanks man I appreciate your support. I know the sound cuts at Chilly Willie's it's a preview after all. It just kinda... cuts there
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Heh it looks like a good start, the guys heads are abit silly, and the gitl looks normal, nice touch with the speed motion from day to knight and all kinda silly little things here and there happen at the building, animation looks good, story can work, i can see this series going past 10 episodes, as for the preview, well the sound kinda went out at the end or middle, and it was abit hard to hear at times, but that might just be my computer, maybe more detail inside the aprt. more windows, and pictures, lamps, plants, etc, but from what i can see looks good let me know when it comes to the portal, and dont forget to check out my new movie (The Vortex), anyways nice preview, keep on flashing...
MOVIE COMMENTARY: A wellmade preview, with good info on what to expect, and a plus cause its a top reviewer who is part of it all...
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thepromaster responds:
Thanks, man. You think this could go past 10 episodes? Well if you think it can then we'll just have to get working on that!! Thanks I'm glad you thought it was stupid!
I was ok i guess
Ok heres a few suggestions, mind you their just my opinions
1.Try not to use triangle heads
2. Finish it before you sibmit it, the voicing isnt done for the caffeteria food place thing.
3. try to go and use a different body shape, i should help contrast real people
Just my opinions so you dont need to listen to them
thepromaster responds:
Ok cool some suggestions! Ok the triangle head thing maybe millix might do that. Yeah it's a preview so we haven't done anything beyond that point and we're gonna finish it! Diffrent body shape... hmm that seems like a good idea!! Ok we'll think about these thanks man!!!
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GRAPHS: 2 -At least they moved.
SOUND: 2 -Voice acting sucked. Why didn't you finish the entire script? It's not like there was a shortage of voice actors considering they were all played by the same voice and ______________ ___________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ________________.
INTERACTIVITY: 1 -Play button.
STYLE: 4 -Not all immigrants are unemployed bums. In fact, the majority of them are probably working at Walmart as I write this.
VIOLENCE: 0
HUMOUR: 3 -Several poor attempt at humour. I pretty much stopped watching when Skate and Mirch (?) started having gay sex all the way out the diner door.
OVERALL: 3 -I've seen worse, but at least they completed theirs.
thepromaster responds:
Hmm I wonder why you could of reviewed MY movie. Well you say they had gay sex... and I checked your profile so I know you like eddie that's probably why you think it's gay sex. Maybe there isn't a shortage of voice actors on NG but there isn't a lot of FEMALE voice actors. Try to name at least 15 female member of NG without searching for them. We did finish the entire script except we wanted to get people's opinions on it and get some improvements. Ok last thing we didn't say all immigrants were unemployed did we? Exactly it's just luck of the draw, we could of done Mirch (yeah it's Mirch) as an unemployed bum but we did Pawk for no reason. Anyways thanks for your review, I'm sure I'll be seeing a lot of your reviews since eddie gets his "fans" to do that shit.
There we go, getting better.
Niiice. Drawings, not sticks! Voices! Was a bit choppy, don't know if you were going for that though, so, yeah... Bring up the sound quality a bit, facial expressions-detailed faces-things like that would help. Better than the other flashes of yours I've watched. Keep going in this direction, work it up a bit!
P.S. Still a 0 in interactivity... the load button graphics went out of the borders, lol
thepromaster responds:
Ok thanks for the comments this time. I'm glad you liked the graphics and found it at least a little funny. "Still a 0 in interactivity" Maybe it's cause we're not making a fucking game!!