Meh......
No sound. No preloader or replay button. Those are some key componenets in good movie making. Graphics, however, were pretty good. Animation was good too, but could be better too. I liked it anyway though. Nice work. Keep it up!
-TheSquirrelyOne
Cute
Cute art and decent animation for a first try. Your storytelling needs a bit of work though.
Avoid the temptation to have a charatcter pull out a gun for comedy value. Not that I'm a peace freak, but it's done so often on Newgrounds that it's become boring rather than funny.
Try to think of new a creative ways for your characters to heap abuse on each other.
good
nice drawing, put more time into your FbF and you'll be making sweet movies in no time
Too short it was g00d but too short.
g00d graphics and all but make the moives longer next time!
GJ
not bad at all; but you need some music or sound effects.