cool
its a nice song... but the guitar at the begining its too simple... the rest of the song its great
Reviews for "Depression"
hum
some level changes and vocals would do this track a world of good :P
Good, but could use minor improvements....
Minor improvements are all it needs. Overall it's a great song! I'd say start by adding some, VERY LITTLE, but noticeable differences between the opening guitar and when it repeats it the 2nd and 3rd time before the heavier stuff comes in. When I say small, I mean like 2-4 notes different. Not very much. Because I see that you've added on to it at 1:50. I'm not saying add on to the beginning, just switch up some note progressions here and there. Like, ok, maybe, in the first time through, subtract the chord at :11, or at the end of the first 4 measure bars (the natural "fill" section) and save it for the 2nd time. Just that alone would make an incredible difference. But whatever you do, keep it small.
After listening to it for a while, the EQ sounded good. iPod headphones might not be the best mixing devices. Although this did turn out pretty good for iPod headphones. If you are going to use headphones, make sure it's the high quality ones. If you can't get a hold of those, then don't use headphones. Were headphones your only choice? Or did you have an option of speakers? Speakers might have greatly differed the sound.
A little more volume on the drums during the heavy section would have made this just that much better (By the heavy section I mean where the metal electric guitar part comes in). Maybe, just maybe bring down that whistle that's holding the melody during that part. It sounds like a synth, but I'm not totally sure. Bringing that volume down a little bit, just a smidge for that section would have made it better as well.
I'm not sure. These are just my uneducated, but experienced opinions. Someone might have differing opinions, and that's okay. Maybe I'm horribly wrong, and that's okay too. I'm just throwing what I think out there, so you'll have stuff to compare.
Overall, excellent song. Very mellow, laid back, with a few emotional climaxes. I really enjoyed this song and expect a whole lot more from you in the future! I'll be listening!
- Momo
Pretty good.
I really like the acoustic guitar, bass and drums... but the distorted guitar could have been done a lot better. I just find it a bit... fake. Still good, just... not as good as the rest of the song.
Pretty cool lol