Confused indeed.
How was it inspired by Arfen House nad FLCL? Also, it needs to be longer, and your timing with the voice/mount movements was off. But for what little you did, you did show you can make flash so I give you a 4/5 8/10. Nice work.
Reviews for "Akai~no~Shiroi"
was okay
nice effort
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Hmpf, Its alright I guess..
Eh!
I only gave it a five cuz you used music from Earthbound, the greatest game of all time.
Mike
P.S. Work on making things funny.
not bad
Good drawing. Couple of 'hot' babes! The sound could be better if you used a sound editor first, like roxio sound editor. It was just too loud and it distorted. Bring down the levels in the EQ before you import the file to the flash. Try the song in a few different media players and if its okay there, it should sound good when you import it.