TIPS!!!!
OK great start.
TIPS:
*on the buttons to move places, dont have them move
*On "advance text" buttons, have them in the same place, and bigger if you can. its hard to click them
*I know is would be a big pain in the ass, but see if you can increase the size of everthing
*add a few sounds from the games
*have a better battle system maybee like....hit spacebar to attack and enter to defend or something like that. please dont make another clicking game
*have the characters do a few things while they talk.