Reviews for Wonderland 3D World 2

[gcn3]

Sigh...

The only reason this lasted me longer than the first was that annoying riddle. Look, don't expect mercy for your games just because you're a beginner and you're only 12. That's not how it works on Newgrounds.

I looked at your other movie, 'The Bust' also. It was rather bad. Some of the reviewers were right, doesn't matter what age you are, you could still do better. Of course, like you say, you didn't put 'NO' effort into it, but you didn't put 'much' either.

Making a good game doesn't mean 'make a riddle that's really hard to get past', or 'create something to click on that moves super fast and is near impossible to complete'.

The only reason I liked your Wonderland 3D's was the pictures and the creepy ambiance you put into it. Other than that, it's just boxes you click on to get to the end.

potbellybob responds:

Hmm... a bit to read, but thank you for the review. You're right. Screw "The bust", lets focus on this game. The next game I promice I'll try to make better.

[Love-Shock]

uh

PLOT!!! PLOT!!! PLEASSEEEE

potbellybob responds:

okay, okay! Where is the love, Love_Shock?????

[ripperjill]

potential, but too bottle-fed & pointless, so far.

there's potential to this - story- and visual-wise, but being told where to click is kind of weak, and what's even the point of being able to back-track, in this one? the last one at least had some "back up, things have changed" stuff. and the "riddle" and "which floor?" stuff..? where did that even come from? there's nothing to help you figure it out but trial and error and that's not really the best way to set up a game, in my opinion. but the graphics were decent, the music was good, and there was at least an attempt at story. good luck in future endeavors!

[Snikt-49]

meh...

I saw wonderland and thought Alice In Wonderland how wrong was I.

potbellybob responds:

Very wrong. It might as well be "Myst 3D", but under international copyright laws, I couldn't. hehe... Thanx for the review.

[Mengzor]

could have been so much more

wtf? i waited like 5 minutes for this to load up and it wasnt even in proper 3d ,it was just pre-rendered inmages . the gameplay is far far too simple , it was just clicking the stupid box in the middle of the screen and then before you know it .. the game is over.
so lets review:
1. use picures
2. maybe add some animation
3. make game more than clicking a f***in box
4. more game less credits (nobody realy cares who's ideas they were , as if there was a plot anyway)
5. maybe add a plot

potbellybob responds:

Well... I really dont know how to respond, but I guess I'll just say this: After you take a game and cut it in half, the plot seems to drift away. This is just half of the game. The full game is this one and World 1 combined. I'll try to use your other comments in my sequal, if I decide to make one.