Not bad
I agree with heckballs, the text needs to be a lot slower. The idea was interesting but its waaaaaay too short, nothing really happened to warrent it being an 'episode'. The problem is with people when they get an idea is that they want people to see it as soon as they can, so instead of submitting a full movie, they submit loads of little episodes. Each episode might get a mediocre score, but altogether the movie as a whole might get a better score. Keep up the work, be interesting to see how things work out for you.
- Sixty