DAMN!
Oh my god! this is wicked! well actualy i have 1 thing to bitch about .
the main arp right at the beginning. it sounds weak. to weak, i know you want it to sound soft but just maby to soft k?
that is the only sugestion i have for you, awsome song and hope to gere the full SOON
haha yeah yeahh well so far im liking the critiscm here, helps for the final... thankyouu mmm1!
damn yo...
i loved that intro, so smooth and the vocals are very well used. after the intro however i don't think it was strong enough. more kick in that part. percussion besides that was pretty good. more bass definitely, that was the thing its missing the most. cool instrument around :43 the instruments are good. but i can see this song being the same thing over and over and just switching instruments. get a larger variety in the melody. it's great now, but needs more variety and it's on its way to being awesome. pm when you submit it.
4/5
-crepth
Not strong enough... I agree. And your absolutly right about its repetivity, not now (in its 1 minute stage), but you can see it happening... I expect to add some more energy to the main melody... after the sidechained secondary melody I'll probably add a 20 - 30 second break with some nice light pads or something not really sure... Thanks for the advice, I appreciate it.. and yeah ill definitly pm you when its finished.. peace