Close, but no cigar
This little flash really isn't polished at all. The graphics are horrible and I didn't really get a sense of style other than developing Flash skills. The To Be Continued just makes this movie feel more imcomplete than it already is. I mean, if you're going to spend half of the movie arguing for someone to play, they might as well make some kind of appearance at the game. My only advice is to really practice on your Flash skills and try to remake this movie into the great work it's capable of.