Nice flick
Am I the first that says that the animation is not too fast? I like the way it is and it nicely remembers me on the "battlefield" series by ringfinger :)
Nice work.
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MAGmcp responds:
thanx for the review\bbs response ! =)
i figure it cud be longer and i tiny tiny bit slower.... lol
and yes as i said i love ringfingers stuff so i gues s i was affectd by his battelfield series. notice how he makes stick movies but the stick style changes - its the same with me =)
pretty nice
Fairly good animation, good choice of music and everything. my main suggestion is that it couol\\ld have been longer.
Yes, but...
Could do with being a little slower. The action moves a little to slowly. If you slowed it down, it would also make it longer, and people could see what was going on a little better. It is good though. And give it a proper title. And be a little more self confident.
MAGmcp responds:
thanx
ill try... i though adding frame by frame progresson buttons but figured out it wud just make the movie ugly... it kinda came out this way, even when i lowered from 20 to 18 fps... any idea for a good title ?
((( OK )))
Try not to tell us how to review it thats just not nice, but anyways it was kinda cool even if it was sticks, and notbad for your second, what i liked most about it was the animated play button, the animation itself seemed to run very fast but also was smooth, so not bad for a stick flick...
MOVIE COMMENTATY: Fast paced stick action...
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MAGmcp responds:
i didnt TELL anyone what reviews to write.. im asking for contructive reviews, cos im quite a noob and if u help me ull (logically) get better content from me in the future..
i know its fast... if ill have any time to spare, ill be re-making it so it will go slower but just sa smooth.. i figured, u can understand whats goin on way better if u watch it a couple of times.. ive put in quite alot of detail but u cant really see it =\
and i still wonder.. whats so special about an animated button =O =P
Its okay
Well I don't see what people are talking about it being too fast.. it ran the perfect speed for me. Mb I just think stick movies should be rather fast tho.
I did like the action and the violence, but the loop for the music wasn't a very good one, it didn't go completly.. and sounded a bit DBZesq, but from some of the things they were doing thats the sorta thing you were going for right?
I think that once you get a story line in there, and maybe a little bit of dialogue this could be worth alot more than I have given it.
The animation did seem pretty clean, but I do think that it was way too small... I mean I think the absolute min shoudl really bee the flash default settings... This white review box that I am typing in right now has pretty much the same dimensions as the movie...
MAGmcp responds:
lol )
it was supposed to be small, cos its paintbrush sticks.. if i needed more action space i ewud make it bigger but the sticks are the same size, look at "the battelfield"... it does not suppose to have a story, its supposed be funny becuz its totaly rendom and illogical.. and it has nothing to do with dbz, i didnt even ever watch dbz i have no idea whats it about...
i fixed the sound loop i just didnt uplaod it yet cos im kinda remaking the whole movie.. and i have other flashes on my hands so im very buzy.. and there ARE dialogs, but not in words, rather in symbols... take a close look...
thanx for the review =)