went from below average to damn good :)
haha, i liked it. watching it, it really did have it's ups and downs, as from the start it looked like it would be really crappy.
the image of the girl on the couch watching the TV wasn't very well detailed, and thus sort of made me ponder how bad the rest of the graphics would be. but alas! everything improved! the animation got a lot better (in comparrison to her walking to the door), and i think that it turned out quite well.
my only problem with this was the voice acting... mainly of the girl. you should have got your sister or friend to do it for you, because it sounded really lame! hahah.
but, all in all, a great ending. nice work dude.
7/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!)