YES.
Finally, something nice and soothing to listen to. I see where you were going withy the pad and beat.. but the combination didn't work out to well. YOu JUST need to remix these and this song would sound AWESOME. You really have a talent at playing the music, but not at putting it together. Get a freind to help you or something. Actually, depending on what program you are using, I could help you out with this song. It would still be yours, but I would love to help. Just contact me if you are interested.
Keep it up!