This could of been better
What you couldn't write any thing better
This could of been better
What you couldn't write any thing better
I love it when people scream "this could have been better", then never explain why it isn't as good as it could be or what isn't working, but instead just sit and complain.
Don't expect results if the creator doesn't know the problem.
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You could remove the first 5 secs, allowing the guitar to start and be quickly followed by the beat. My suggestion is minor, but i wonder if the song will become better.
Awesome!!!
It's pure awesome rock dude!!!!!!!Rock on!!!
SIC
This is an awesome dance beat. Nice break-dancing compliment thanks.
Much Better!
You made the song at least 50% better. I love it.