Reviews for DragonSpawn Trailer

[HighDefinition]

pretty good trailer..

nice selective background audio track... brought a sense of anticipation and looked appealing.... looked like some form of vampire ? i liked the brief successions of the text telling the storyline... made it 'fast' paced.. the pre-loader is pretty darn stylish too, good job on that... it was pretty repeatative but i know it's only supposed to be a preview...maybe if the animation of him running with his arms was faster ? it would suit the upbeat movie pace.. and the shadow work is nice, characters are drawn okay... but the last scene with his wings... might wanna add like a cool looking background behind it, preferably darker.. well that's what i think, but good overall! nice work

dslmodem responds:

I originally had a dark looking castle in the background at the end, but then you couldn't see his wings, so I made it light, and it looked crappy, so I just cleared it and made it straight white. I'll work in it later. thanks for taking the time to review though, you input is much appreciated.

[Nylo]

Good job for a trailer.

Wow, a trailer that's actually interesting, but *gasp* informative. You seem to know what you want out of the series, which is always a plus. I can't even begin to recount the number of trailers I've seen where it's clear the author is completely over-ambitious and will never complete the series in a million years. Visuals look nice, too. The fancy suit in the dark atmosphere really set a mood. Spit screen was a nice touch, too. God knows drawing in Flash is a pain in the ass, so I hope you'll have the perserverance to stick it out and make the complete version. Wings looked a little iffy at the end, maybe add more shape and definition (pointed with claw-like things at the end, like bats). But other than that, really good for a trailer. Nice job and good luck.

dslmodem responds:

Thanks. I do plan on finish it, mostly because my girlfriend really want to see it finished, and if I don't she'll nag me to death. It will take me some time, that why I targeted several month from now, because I don't get a lot of time to work on it. And the wings I had originally intentioned to be black feather-ed angel wings. Hope you get to see the finished version, and thanks for the input.

[rawfingers]

well it might turn out good

i dont know a dragon spawn kinda sounds like a dumb character but i will probally be suprised with how he turns out. i hope you make him a badass who kills many people at one time. good luck.

dslmodem responds:

Actually, it's about vampires, Since dracula means son of dragon in romanian, or something like that, so yeah, and I though dragon spawn sounded badass, but hey, to each his own, right?

[Raging-Tiger]

When I

When i saw the loader, I thought it looked ok, then i saw this girly anime type thing with purple hair?
Is that a transexual?
Not very appealing.

[DeadBunny]

crap

yep total crap