I like this man. I do think the drums could've done a little more variation but honestly I think that might be down to how you wanted the song to keep its pace.
Not a criticism of the song here but I could totally see this with some double bass and a breakdown with metalcore style drumming. But if you know anything about me, you'd know that's just cuz I'm a nintendocore guy. >.>
I like the feeling the song evokes, and I get how you got here with the art. There's just something I can't put into words at the moment about it... Oh well.