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I liked this cartoon, and I didn't like it.
The idea of it, and the potential of it was, in my opinion, amazing. I liked the way it went day by day, good technique on the fading days there.
But (and i know u dont care) if you had actually taken the time out to draw detailed characters, i would have given it 9 out of 10.
The music and killing the birds was inappropriate, and it was the above 3 factors that made me give it 7 instead of 9.
Average.
I hate stick figures, but I didn't dock you for that. What I did dock you for was this:
First of all, and most importantly, the music is totally inappropriate. It just doesn't fit. "My hero?" Why? Is the paperboy someone's hero? Is the homicidal maniac with the gun someone's hero? The lyrics just don't fit.
Second, it wasn't really all that funny. There was no twist ending or punchline, just a random series of events. This really needed some kind of suprise at the end to ram the point home. Otherwise, good job.
Funny,Nice Music, Sound not too good
Really nice job man. I wanna start off by saying I thought this movie was hilarious and I apreciate your style of humor. I also like stick figures, and actually think they are funnier that fully drawn characters. As long as they are used right, like in this movie (and big mistake, as well as many others). I thought the music was good too, but the music mixed with those flinstone-like sound effects wasn't the best. A little on the cheesy side. I was laughing a lot during the part where he sent the bike out and crawled behind it, and when the guy was shooting the birds. I found that strangely amusing. Graphics were good and crisp, although nothing amazingly special there. Overall good/funny movie. Good job!
Great work...just one thing
Excellent work dude. I loved the music and the everything else. However, I did not like how the paperboy died. He could of had a funnnier death. Great job though.
DAWM
I HAVENT LAUGHED THAT HARD IN A LONG TIME...
nice to hear.....so it seems you enjoyed it ;-)