A review for you...
Right, the introduction is sounding quite promising. Although that piano sounds a little basic to me. I think it maybe could have worked better as a different sound playing that tune. The ambient background pads however are spot on. Really deep and give this piece alot of thickness. I'm a fan of the main synth. It works nicely.
Perhaps the drums could have been a little louder? I think that towards the end especially, you really need those powerful drums to give it a bit more of a climax. It's a very happy tune, it's well organised and maintains interest until the end.
Over it's a good song. Good work.