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Reviews for "Jessi Rockabilly Poster"

well i have to say

this piece is well done but there are some problems as the person under me stated the nose but other than that not much to complain about

Good; not perfect.

I like it. I especially like the background, and how it feels decorative yet simultaneously adds to the action of the piece (vertical lines add to the appearance that she's falling.) I like the character and her outfit.
However, it's got some notable problems. First and foremost, the face. I've seen numerous anime artists do this, and it always bothers the shit out of me, but that nose makes her face indent without coming back up for the forehead. Look at a real human head; the forehead and lips are aligned and where the nose moves back into the face, it curves back up so that the forehead sticks out. Yours doesn't do that, and it makes the bottom of her face stick too far out as a result. I know its anime and that anime faces don't usually follow normal rules, blah, blah, blah, but there are certain ways that the human body is built that should always be followed in order for things to look natural. That's one of them.
The next gripe is much smaller, and that's some proportions. Her hand is a tad too small, her arm just the slightest bit too short, and her neck is a little too short as well.
Besides these anatomical messups, it's a very solid piece that has a pretty good personality. Good work.