It's good, but you're hitting red zone.
Its a good tune, watch how your music is hitting red zone, where your levels are way too high. It makes crackle and tune is really lost due to it.
It's a shame because the music has awesome potential but really spoiled because the volume has been punched up way too high. I know you want people to play it loud cause it sounds better that way, but quality has been sacraficed.