equalizing is all wrong :/
wish ng had a breakbeat or acid section, so i can see why you put this in dnb (no other place to really put it), but if you redid the percussion it could be quite a bit better. get a thicker kick, deeper bass, sidechain some of the main leads a little bit to give your audio some interesting complexity. all in all a good idea, but its a little too progressive for me ;)
it's alright
it'd be a lott better if you used more instruments than the single phazing saw lead though... you know, to help change it up. you said it's not dnb, which excludes your excuse of keeping it simple, especially if it's supposed to be breakbeat.
it'd help a lot if you changed up the drums. changed them up a lot. there's almost no fills at all throughout the song, and the one that you DO have is repeated every 8th measure! my being a drummer really helps in drum transitions, so if you ever need any assistance with that sort of thing, just pm me.
also, one last thing, try throwing some bass in there. even if it's techno or breakbeat or whatever, there still needs to be at least SOME bass in there lol.
overall what you did with what you have earns you a 5 and a 10, but i honestly think if you go all the way, you could create one of the greatest masterpieces this website has ever seen.
great!
Aw!!!
Dude... I loved the ending, with the thunder or whatever. The begining part is tight too man.
Best song ever!
This has got to be the most techno song i've heard in a while, the set ambience in there just adds to the awesome factor
Awesome!
Sounding really good, man! Great beats! Beginning reminds me of some of the stuff I used to do on Rubberduck software (D-Lusion).
Would be nice to hear a bit more bass to it though, oh, and I don't quite understand why you put it under the D&B genre. Sorry, had to mark you down for that, bro!
DnB is as close to breakbeat as I can get, in a sense the path of least resistance as far as "THIS ISN'T (insert genre here)" goes for the genres I do (breakbeat, jungle, breaktrance, ect)