yawn
You owe me 7 minutes of my life back.
Reviews for "Ray - Part 1"
ehh.
kind of cool. kind of lame. ehh. sure.
--schnookie
Not .. horrible
I admit this is pretty cool, but ...
1) Two words: "Spell Check".
2) It's "Guns and Roses", they don't fuckin own anything.
3) It's "you're" (you are) not "your".
4) Get some friends to help out on the voice acting, it will do wonders.
5) Stop with the frickin South Park artwork already. It's been done.
Other than all this, it's decent. Better artwork would have made this far more enjoyable. I'd have rated this a 9 or so if it weren't so cliche'. Keep trying, because you're on to something.
- Peace -
Hooray for pointless repetitive violence.
You could have at least done interesting violence, guns are so boring.
mwha.
Not really challenging